英语作文改错高中？1、正文第二行,“The wider a road is,the more people is who walk up the road”改成“The wider one road is,the more people can walk on it”.2、那么，英语作文改错高中？一起来了解一下吧。
Dear David
How are you doing? Ihad a good timethis summer. I had visited the TaiShanMountainwith my classmates that is the highest mountain inShandongProvince.
We arrived at the bottom of the Tai Shan and during the journey we told many jokes. The way to the mountain is hard. Although tired, we didn't give up. We overcame many difficulties with the help of the passers-bys.
Finally, we arrived the top of Tai Shan, where we saw many beautiful scenes. We felt very happy.
Now, I've told my experience of this summer. How about you? I'm looking forward to your reply!
Daer David
How are you? I'm writing the email to you about my summer vacation.
I , with my friend, went to Taihan in the summer vacation. Taishan is the highest mountain inShandongProvince. It is also famous all around theChina. We are delighted to travel there for a tour. The mountain path is difficult for us to climb through. Although we are very exhausted, we didn't give up during the journey. Eventually, we arrived at the mountain peak. The environment is good. We saw a lot of variety of plants, such as flowers, green trees. Although we don't know there names, it’s fun to see them.
第二行we has finsh and rice for lunch. has换had 过去式
we both like listened to music listened 换listening likedoing
Last week, I went with my sister to Jiangxin island. The weather was very good. It was hot and sunny. We both arrive at Jiangxin island by car. We hadrice and fish for lunch. After that,my sister and I went to the beach . There was not too many people . It was quiet without many children.I
played till I was tired . But I was very happy . My stster didn't like to play, because she wanted to eat good food. In the evening. I went with my sister to a theater. we both listened to music .They sang really well. Next morning,we went homeby bus.
所有错误都改了！
I have had a good time in this summer，这里的第一个have去掉
I had visited the Taishanwith my classmates that is the highest mountain in Shandong Province.
这里的第一个had去掉
We arrived the bottom这里 arrived后面加at
The ways to go to themountain is diffculty后面两个词改成was difficult
I'm lookingforward your reply!这里forward后面加to
回信中 I'm writing the emile fell you about my summer vacation travel.这里fell改成to tell
Iwith my friend went to Taishan in the summer vacation. 这里改成 I went to Taishan in the summer vacation with my friend.
这篇文章中你时态有问题，用了很多一般现在时，全部改成一般过去，比如is改成was don’t改成didn’t
Dear David
How is it going? I had a good time in this summer when visitting the Taishan, the highest mountain in Shandong Province,with my classmates.
Happy and joy,we arrived at the foot of the Taishan.Thewalk path to the mountain was much more challenging than what we expected before. Tired as we were,we didn't give up. We overcame many diffculties with passersbys' selflessness help.
Finally,we reached the top of Taishan.the beautiful scenes in our eyes made us felt proud.
Now,this is my experience of this summer.How about you?I'm looking forward to your reply.
不好意思没时间了下午还有考试希望本英语只能得143的渣的回答对你有帮助！
以上就是英语作文改错高中的全部内容，1. Halloween, I would like to dress up as a black thing 修改：On Hallowmas, I would like to be dressed up as a black figure.(dress 是及物动词，I是被装扮的对象，所以要改为被动语态；“东西”指的是生命物的外形，而不是无生命的thing)。
